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Face_NLPLATINUM Member
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Location: Netherlands - Breda


Posted:
Hey everyone,

I designed a few businesscards, and 1 of them will be printed lots of times (at least 250 biggrin), but I can't choose between the designs... So if you could go to
Telpeva's Gallery
and tell me which design you like most, and what should be changed about it (text color, font, other colors, placing of stuff...)

Bij voorbaat dank -> Thnx!

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UCOFSILVER Member
15,417 posts
Location: South Wales


Posted:
Well..

If this isnt a blantant attempt to get everyone to look at your gallery, I dont know what is.
When your pictures are popular, they are displayed at eh top of the screen, thus giving your free advertising!

wink

and you might want to change the phone numbers to real ones as I very much doubt that people could get hold of you on 06-12345678

Unless that is your actuall number?

In which case you are very very lucky....

Lillie Frognot a stranger
558 posts
Location: wales


Posted:
I like number 4
I like the colour in the center section, that bluey purpley colour.
It's nice.

Eat when you're hungry
Sleep where it's dry
No one is ever what they seem
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Face_NLPLATINUM Member
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Location: Netherlands - Breda


Posted:
hehe, I haven't thought about the free advertising part ubbangel, really, but I don't really think that anyone on HoP is interested in that...

And the phone-numbers are ofcourse not right, but I was to lazy to search them up biggrin.... Anyhow, it was ment to be purely about the design (and not the correctness of the text ...)

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MedusaSILVER Member
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Location: 8 days at Cloudbreak, 6 in Perth, Australia


Posted:
I like design 1 and 4....I am indecisive about which one is the better of the two.

orkossmember
28 posts
Location: veracruz, mexico


Posted:
i think the number 2 is just perfect

Kombi guyBRONZE Member
HOP OM
225 posts
Location: HOP Central, New Zealand


Posted:
Well done very nice cards clap
I actually like #3 I like the simplicity of just the black with the fire, very funky.

Face_NLPLATINUM Member
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513 posts
Location: Netherlands - Breda


Posted:
Again design number 4? That's weird, I didn't expect that, It was one of the lesser in my opinion (the blue/purple was just an experiment)... And number 1 is in my opinion one of the best...
till so far -> inconclusive smile...

thnx for the reactions, keep m going ubbangel angel angel2 angelblue

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Psycho_lemmingSILVER Member
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15 posts
Location: Scotland


Posted:
Mmmm.... i like 3 best smile

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vanizeSILVER Member
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3,899 posts
Location: Austin, Texas, USA


Posted:
#4 is my fav.

urm... you having them professionally printed, or doing them yourself? if it isn't proffesional, then you might think about using a lot less black, as large areas of black ink tend to rub off in people wallets and make them uptight (speaking from experience)

-v-

Wiederstand ist Zwecklos!


ado-pGOLD Member
Pirate Ninja
3,882 posts
Location: Galway/Ireland


Posted:
I think you should group your teams skills together collectivley rather than seperate them per person.....

as in

Warriors of light
Poi/Staff/Dance/Fireeating etc.

Contact:
Dave John Tom
122237 23556 23435

Agree with Vanice about the black also, looks great with fire but unless you printing high quality glossys the you might have a problem....

Love is the law.


Fine_Rabid_DogInternet Hate Machine
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Posted:
4 looks purty. mes like it!

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Face_NLPLATINUM Member
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Location: Netherlands - Breda


Posted:
more 4...hmmmz... so 3 and 4 favorites till so far...

They will be printed professionally, the quality is very nice, very good, and it isn't expensive at all, so that's a nice combination right biggrin!?!?! I've got full-color cards of them, only more or less entirely blue, and that doesn't give off, so I have confident in their black as well

Hmmmz, that is interesting; putting the skills together, I think I will do that!

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rarrBRONZE Member
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121 posts
Location: Manchester, UK


Posted:
Businesscard design 2!

just my 2p worth

Fueroaddict
465 posts
Location: Netherlands


Posted:
If you want a nice deep black you should put 40% cyan through it.
Take it from a designer.

Hmm, there's gotta be something round and shiny, I can play with


Face_NLPLATINUM Member
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513 posts
Location: Netherlands - Breda


Posted:
Hmmmz, Foxy liked 4 and 3 as well, 3 most... What is nice about 4 that 3 lacks? if it is the color I might combine them by taking 3 and put the bluelike layer on top of the sparkling picture...

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Face_NLPLATINUM Member
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513 posts
Location: Netherlands - Breda


Posted:
Heya Designer, you can give me details/tips/explanation tonight biggrin

ps the choice is a probably choice...

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SunriseIvetka
211 posts

Posted:
number 3....berendooooooooooo definetly...


so so talented guy!!!


hug

sunny
grouphug


SunriseIvetka
211 posts

Posted:
yes and tomorrow at 10 am...ubbrollsmile

sunny
grouphug


Tao StarPooh-Bah
1,662 posts
Location: Bristol


Posted:
1 or 2, but probably 2.

very professional looking, but interesting. i love the picture.

I had a dream that my friend had a
strong-bad pop up book,
it was the book of my dreams.


The Real Fryed FishGod's illgitament son
1,489 posts
Location: state of confusion


Posted:
i liked 3 or 4 the best, would not change a thing on either of them if you use it

You can't avoid pain by fencing yourself from it.
Some times you need the help of others more than anything else
But you have to let them close enough to help......
People want to be needed, I found that out too


nearly_all_goneSILVER Member
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Location: Southampton, United Kingdom


Posted:
I'd say 2 was my favourite... like the style of it. Different ones could have different pics..?

What a wonderful miracle if only we could look through each other's eyes for an instant.
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rbmnycBRONZE Member
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194 posts
Location: Brooklyn, NY, USA


Posted:
#3

TrillianBRONZE Member
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319 posts
Location: Cincinnati, Ohio, USA


Posted:
I like #3 the most, too.

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Location: ffidrac


Posted:
I really like the two images on either side of #4 and they way they blend in to the background, so am not too keen on the bluey bit meself... i think it would look nice just back with those two images sort of glowing out, very striking... I like #3 too but i think you could space out the two fella on the top right hand corner a bit more so you can see them both. They're all very nice though

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DomBRONZE Member
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3,009 posts
Location: Bristol, UK


Posted:
I don't like balck backgrounds, but if you insist on using it then realy check a proof before doing the print run to make sure the text is actually readable.

Face_NLPLATINUM Member
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513 posts
Location: Netherlands - Breda


Posted:
Hey everyone,

I counted the votes :-), and the winner was number 3, followed by one vote btw by number two and number four btw...
I sat today with my two group mates and agreed to make it number three, and when I showed them small differences, they liked a version with lines on it, so the result will be online in half an hour or so...

Btw, I changed the text so the arts are general, not specified per person, and I spaced out the two people, thnx for the advice!

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