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spacedementia
spacedementia

newbie
Location: Missouri
Member Since: 17th May 2005
Total posts: 16
Posted:I might be insane
but I thought I would start this
a thread of haiku


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Kelhoon
Member
Location: Christchurch, NZ
Member Since: 23rd Jul 2004
Total posts: 6
Posted:Balls, clubs, rings. Throw, catch:
Meditation, rythym, flow.
Orbit eternal.


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bing!

i beat my inner child
Location: manchester UK
Member Since: 25th Jan 2005
Total posts: 184
Posted:i have just learned what,
haiku is all about so,
this is my first go!


--the spark what lit the flame which started the fire that burned forever--

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Shu
Shu

Retro Fyre Wizzard
Location: Pietermaritzburg (KZN)
Member Since: 19th Apr 2005
Total posts: 538
Posted:fire poi in my hand
living entrancing energy
fluid body dance


Regards hug

Shu
(Ice-E FyreStorm - Group Manager & Performer)

You know those people your parentals warned you about?... I'M ONE OF THEM! ubbloco
Yes, i do bite!!

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bluecat
bluecat

geek, level 1
Location: everywhere
Member Since: 15th Dec 2002
Total posts: 5300
Posted:bored at work I seem to spend
too much time on Home of poi
exchanging old threads for new


Holistic Spinner (I hope)

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_Clare_
_Clare_

Still wiggling
Location: Belfast
Member Since: 22nd Oct 2002
Total posts: 5967
Posted:Corrected to avoid

Random lines and apparent stupidity

Oops. Got it wrong again



rolleyes



shrug

EDITED_BY: Firepoise (1116586446)


Getting to the other side smile

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spritie
spritie

Pooh-Bah
Location: Galveston, TX
Member Since: 9th Sep 2001
Total posts: 2014
Posted:don't people know that

five seven five haiku is

and not random lines

biggrin


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DoktorSkell
DoktorSkell

addict
Location: Van Diemans Land
Member Since: 11th Jan 2005
Total posts: 475
Posted:i wrote a haiku
its not as good as yours is
so i wont tell you


Fair luna bright, fair luna moon
it shines at night but fades too soon
fair luna moon, fair luna bright
forever we dance
we dance under starlight

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firebyrd
member
Location: belfast
Member Since: 6th May 2005
Total posts: 154
Posted:concentric circles
flames painting rhythmic patterns
expression of my soul

biggrin (i'm quite proud of that....)

spacedementia - nice idea, we could write a spinning renga, if all the haiku are on topic say poi or staff creating a list of related haiku could form a really nice renga.. what d'ya think?


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PyroWill
PyroWill

HoP's Barman. Trapped aged 6 months
Location: Staines
Member Since: 4th Aug 2004
Total posts: 4437
Posted:i.....
am.....
confused....

what a bad one, someone dare to quote what a haiku is?

please biggrin


An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind

Give a man a fish and he'll eat 4 a day hit a man with a brick and you can have all his fish and his wife

"Will's to pretty for prison" - Simian

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Shu
Shu

Retro Fyre Wizzard
Location: Pietermaritzburg (KZN)
Member Since: 19th Apr 2005
Total posts: 538
Posted:For PyroWill
Written by: spritie

don't people know that
five seven five haiku is
and not random lines
biggrin



Regards hug

Shu
(Ice-E FyreStorm - Group Manager & Performer)

You know those people your parentals warned you about?... I'M ONE OF THEM! ubbloco
Yes, i do bite!!

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PyroWill
PyroWill

HoP's Barman. Trapped aged 6 months
Location: Staines
Member Since: 4th Aug 2004
Total posts: 4437
Posted:still dont understand

An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind

Give a man a fish and he'll eat 4 a day hit a man with a brick and you can have all his fish and his wife

"Will's to pretty for prison" - Simian

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Fine_Rabid_Dog
Internet Hate Machine
Location: They seek him here, they seek ...
Member Since: 26th May 2004
Total posts: 10530
Posted:a haiku is a japenese poem type jobby that is arranged like this

Five syllables
seven syllables
five syllables

Tho i may be wrong... feel free to correct me if i am


The existance of flamethrowers says that someone, somewhere, at sometime said "I need to set that thing on fire, but it's too far away."

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Gandy
Gandy

member
Location: London
Member Since: 24th Feb 2005
Total posts: 34
Posted:no you are not wrong

in fact you are quite correct

with your counting lines





though i thought they were supposed to be about capturing your surroundings (now I could be very wrong with that bit)



coul not resist adding this:



flowers, weaves and loops

blazing trails through velvet black

soothing balm of light

EDITED_BY: Gandy (1116591274)


*are those my feet?!*

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nome
nome

Member
Location: Edinburgh
Member Since: 30th Apr 2005
Total posts: 35
Posted:It often includes
Some images of seasons
And some kind of twist


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Fire_Moose
Fire_Moose

Elusive and Bearded
Location: Scottsdale, AZ
Member Since: 2nd May 2007
Total posts: 3597
Posted:I can't beleive this
Only fifteen posts on here?
This is madness, Post.


O.B.E.S.E.

Owned by Mynci!

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jarle
jarle

Lv15 Ranger
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Member Since: 13th Mar 2007
Total posts: 1489
Posted:Isn't this on KoL?
Or mayhaps I am crazy,
I hope the former.


Kupo!

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pineapple pete
pineapple pete

water based
Location: melbourne
Member Since: 20th Sep 2004
Total posts: 5125
Posted:haikus are easy
but sometimes they dont make sence
refridgerator

hug


"you know there are no trophys for doing silly things in real life yeah pete?" said ant "you wont get a 'listened to ride of the valkyries all the way to vietnam' trophy"

*proud owner of the very cute fire_spinning_angel, birgit and neon shaolin*

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Brenn
Brenn

Will carpal your tunnel in a minute.
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Member Since: 28th Jun 2004
Total posts: 3286
Posted:I just want to say,
Something completely silly,
I'm covered in bees


ॐ

Owner of burningoftheclavey smile
Owned by Lost83spy

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jarle
jarle

Lv15 Ranger
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Member Since: 13th Mar 2007
Total posts: 1489
Posted:Something that bugs me,
People talking in lectures.
JUST SHUT THE HELL UP!


Kupo!

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Sambo_Flux
Sambo_Flux

Introverted
Location: Norf London
Member Since: 14th Jun 2006
Total posts: 833
Posted:Already have one

Find it in my signature

This one is pointless


My Mind is a Ship
Emotions become the Waves
Soul is the Ocean

If a quizz is quizzical, what is a test?

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jarle
jarle

Lv15 Ranger
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Member Since: 13th Mar 2007
Total posts: 1489
Posted:Yay for signatures!
Mine's from Final Fantasy,
Stolen like a kiss.


Kupo!

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Deamon_Llama
Deamon_Llama

member
Location: Melbourne
Member Since: 14th Oct 2007
Total posts: 78
Posted:perhaps a purpose
is not needed in poem
but just some beauty?


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No statements are true unless they can be proven scientifically.
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UnclassifiedLeggyGirl
UnclassifiedLeggyGirl

One day penguins will take over the world
Location: Derby
Member Since: 15th Aug 2006
Total posts: 916
Posted:beauty is needed
for any poem to work
except for this one...


ummmm...........anybody have any suggestions as to what i can put here?!

mjk is monitoring your interwebs!

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Deamon_Llama
Deamon_Llama

member
Location: Melbourne
Member Since: 14th Oct 2007
Total posts: 78
Posted:Poetry; beauty
A correlation unmatched
Words in their right form


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No statements are true unless they can be proven scientifically.
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MagsKat
MagsKat

Don't feed her cookies
Location: Surrey side
Member Since: 22nd Aug 2007
Total posts: 113
Posted:twisting and turning,
energy is flowing free
Spin poi with me please


Formally known as kat224

We are not friends.. we never were.. but if i was part of your life then i thank you

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Fire_Moose
Fire_Moose

Elusive and Bearded
Location: Scottsdale, AZ
Member Since: 2nd May 2007
Total posts: 3597
Posted:This was inspired
By the great game, K-O-L
I think it's genius


O.B.E.S.E.

Owned by Mynci!

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MagsKat
MagsKat

Don't feed her cookies
Location: Surrey side
Member Since: 22nd Aug 2007
Total posts: 113
Posted:burning comets
trail blazing bursts of light
keep the fire alight


Formally known as kat224

We are not friends.. we never were.. but if i was part of your life then i thank you

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BurdaA
BurdaA

Sacrebleu
Location: At the quiet limit
Member Since: 20th Jul 2007
Total posts: 377
Posted:I, desire within,
spin my quiet web between
your heart and others


Poi(poi~y) n. : A Hawaiian food made from the tuber of the taro that is cooked, pounded to a paste, and fermented.
- part owner of Wooktastic

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JauntyJames
JauntyJames

Carpal \'Tunnel
Location: Hampshire College, MA, USA
Member Since: 22nd Dec 2004
Total posts: 3533
Posted: Written by: pineapple pete


haikus are easy
but sometimes they dont make sence
refridgerator

hug



That's on my shirt right now.


-James

"How do you know if you're happy or sad without a mask? Or angry? Or ready for dessert?"

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Invader Xan
Invader Xan

Your friendly neighbourhood mad scientist
Location: Over the hills and far away
Member Since: 7th May 2005
Total posts: 479
Posted:Round and round they go
Until strings catch upon strings
Ouch! No! Not again...


"Love the art in yourself and not yourself in the art."
--Konstantin Stanislavisky

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