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Location: Birmingham, AL, USA
11 posts
Location: Birmingham, AL, USA
Posted:
Just kidding. This is actually a poem. Sorry, I was feeling silly.
Darkness
Thousands of miraculous crystal clear entities
Defined by the sparkling essences of shining depression
Dark light illuminating the shallow paths of everyday humanity
Blacklight oblivious to any semblance of goodness
Dark warriors with swords of negativity
Slashing vengeance takes over hearts of spawning gold
An experience of bright unadulterated light followed by shattering blackness
Eyes pierce naught throughout the dark
Darkness obliterates the bright and shortens the lifespan of light
Happiness, mere chemicals come together to deny the reality of the black
Goodness is the mere illusion
The temporary creation of bodily chemicals come together in one large lie
Hope, an alternate reality of bright shards cast aside by the net of evil
Freedom, laughably restrained in sparkling teeth of steel
Life, these short distractions from the abstract reality of nothing
Fooling ourselves into thinking we are of import
Import, another illusion borne of the sheer essence of evil
All happiness is fraud, a false state of being made to undo us further
Closer to the black hole emanating false vibrations of pleasure
You go through and there is nothing but the never ending dark of loneliness
January 19, 10:27 PM
Just kidding. This is actually a poem. Sorry, I was feeling silly.
Darkness
Thousands of miraculous crystal clear entities
Defined by the sparkling essences of shining depression
Dark light illuminating the shallow paths of everyday humanity
Blacklight oblivious to any semblance of goodness
Dark warriors with swords of negativity
Slashing vengeance takes over hearts of spawning gold
An experience of bright unadulterated light followed by shattering blackness
Eyes pierce naught throughout the dark
Darkness obliterates the bright and shortens the lifespan of light
Happiness, mere chemicals come together to deny the reality of the black
Goodness is the mere illusion
The temporary creation of bodily chemicals come together in one large lie
Hope, an alternate reality of bright shards cast aside by the net of evil
Freedom, laughably restrained in sparkling teeth of steel
Life, these short distractions from the abstract reality of nothing
Fooling ourselves into thinking we are of import
Import, another illusion borne of the sheer essence of evil
All happiness is fraud, a false state of being made to undo us further
Closer to the black hole emanating false vibrations of pleasure
You go through and there is nothing but the never ending dark of loneliness
January 19, 10:27 PM
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76 posts
Location: london yah know
76 posts
Location: london yah know
Posted:
heavy shit man, u got an english translation ?
lol
heavy shit man, u got an english translation ?
lol
Forever spiraling upwards towards unknown destiny.Where will it end ? Where did it start ?Why ask so many questions ?
Laguna dude
1,438 posts
Location: Laguna, California, US
1,438 posts
Location: Laguna, California, US
Posted:
member number 77, Zeduah, impressive! and only your 10th post?
i'm new, not sure i'll be living here all the time, but glad you showed us your verse, i scribe & spit some slam poetry
damn dark, dude, especially while you're "feeling silly!" what would it sound like if i heard it in your own voice?
member number 77, Zeduah, impressive! and only your 10th post?
i'm new, not sure i'll be living here all the time, but glad you showed us your verse, i scribe & spit some slam poetry
damn dark, dude, especially while you're "feeling silly!" what would it sound like if i heard it in your own voice?
molten cheers,
~ FireMike
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Laguna, California, US
member
73 posts
Location: tuesday
73 posts
Location: tuesday
Posted:
cheer up.
it might never happen.
cheer up.
it might never happen.
We all float down here.
member
11 posts
Location: Birmingham, AL, USA
11 posts
Location: Birmingham, AL, USA
Posted:
I was just writing. I was sort of depressed when I wrote that. I had just gotten rejected by a girl I really, really liked. Unfortunately most of my stuff is dark, I can usually only write depressed, or extremely happy, and the latter doesn't happen too often...
I was just writing. I was sort of depressed when I wrote that. I had just gotten rejected by a girl I really, really liked. Unfortunately most of my stuff is dark, I can usually only write depressed, or extremely happy, and the latter doesn't happen too often...
old hand
829 posts
Location: Brigadoon
829 posts
Location: Brigadoon
Posted:
here. have a toke on this.
you'll feel much better.
*hands zeduah a big fat spliff and falls over*
here. have a toke on this.
you'll feel much better.
*hands zeduah a big fat spliff and falls over*
wherever you go, there you are.
member
63 posts
Location: Ontario
63 posts
Location: Ontario
Posted:
very excellent poetry, i really liked it. And i agree that depession and extreme happiness are the best moods in which to write
very excellent poetry, i really liked it. And i agree that depession and extreme happiness are the best moods in which to write
[email protected] CARPE DIEM seize the day and you will never regret your actions
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2,905 posts
Location: San Diego California
2,905 posts
Location: San Diego California
Posted:
damn now I am depressed
*starts shotgunnin the beer*
maybe if I drink enough I will forget I ever read it??
J/K it was a very interesting piece
damn now I am depressed
*starts shotgunnin the beer*
maybe if I drink enough I will forget I ever read it??
J/K it was a very interesting piece
Some Jarhead last night: "this dumb a$$ thinks hes fireproof"
Laguna dude
1,438 posts
Location: Laguna, California, US
1,438 posts
Location: Laguna, California, US
Posted:
ah, you are an extremist, feels familiar (wink)
ah, you are an extremist, feels familiar (wink)
molten cheers,
~ FireMike
[email protected] (personal messages welcome, no promo spam, please!)
Laguna, California, US
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