Forums > Videos > first poi vid

Posted: 21st Jun 2010
All right, the vid is wicked, I like the black/white choice
a lot, but the the Poi are almost invisible, you should
make them with brighter light. You are in the beginning
of a great story, the 3:10-15 is really cool from your
upcomming style.

Posted: 21st Jun 2010
Cheers!
yah, couldn't do much in regards to visibility with these clips, but they are glow poi, so next time i get a chance to film at night am definitely doing it

Posted: 21st Jun 2010
From what I can see it's good! But yeah, the poi are pretty invisible for most of the time, at least on my screen, so I can't say too much. But from what i can see as well as your body movements, you look quite smooth. The only criticism for you that I can offer is to expand out your movements, not as much with the poi, but with the body. For a lot of that video your movements looked a bit crunched in and I think it looks so much better is you get out of that. Umm, what else can I tell you... I forgot what I was gonna say and I kinda typed out my thoughts without realizing Oh yeah, when you did your waistwraps, you'd have to increase your flexibility and it takes some work, but I think it looks better if you can keep you body still while doing it. If you do work more on that be sure not to injure yourself I don't want that on my hands

Other than that it would've been super awesome if I could see the poi I'm not 100% sure if it's the video or my old laptop. If you want to give some criticism on my on the spot partner poi I'm sure I could use it

The only luck is bad luck.

Shut up before I stall my poi up your ass