I haven't posted on here for ages, but as i just got a new staff I thought I would make a video of it. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated, as I'm a noob, and I have nobody to teach me or to tell me what I'm doing wrong.
Posted: i'm not sure if it's just bad video quality or your using a very dim burning fuel. try coleman fuel they sell a galon of it for about five bucks at walmart.
Posted: or maybe i'm just stoned shitless. who knows.
squidBRONZE Member sanguine 382 posts Location: sur, USA
Posted: some ambient lighting in the beginning would help viewers see the spinner as well as the lights from the wicks.
I understand the feeling of having no one around to evaluate my spinning, so I'll try to be positive, but honest.
1st thing: pay attention to where your feet are planted and where the camera is. Half the time you are spinning you are positioned in a way that we cant see the circle patterns. Try to think about your planes a bit more.
2nd: do more with your arms. Extend with the arm that is holding the staff for that truly dramatic look. Best advice I ever heard was from MCP, when she pointed out how many people hold their passive hand up to their side with the hand all limp, aka: dinosaur arm. For Meg's sake, break that habit. It does wonders for your overall appearance.
and finally: start looking into some contact moves. You don't need a full set of moves, but it adds that WOW factor when you are spinning to just bust out an angel roll or a full jesus out of nowhere.
Keep working on the staff and have fun with it.
"to a man whose only tool is a hammer, the whole world looks like a nail." Abraham Maslow
Fruitbasket#1 Bender Fan :D 133 posts Location: Somewheres i tell ya!
Posted: I found it good and enjoyable.
I agree with squid on the lighting and the feet positioning. But other then that I really enjoyed it
Keep up the good work
(When the colors started too change, I got so scared I forgot it was most likely a video effect)
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BMWBRONZE Member stranger 13 posts Location: Australia
Posted: Haha thanks for the responses,
Im not sure that I can do much about the lighting (my camera is old and lame), but i'll work on the footwork and incorporating some contact into my spinning. ^_^
astonSILVER Member Unofficial Chairperson of Squirrel Defense League 4,061 posts Location: South Africa
Posted: The lighting idea is that you have another light on you.
That way see the spinner and the flames. You can see examples all over youtube of what we mean.
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