Bam BamYour Average Every Day Sane Psycho 31 posts
Posted:
I've been spinning for about 11 months and I'd like to hear what you guys think :3 Constructive criticism welcome XD
What, me worry?
TeamoGOLD Member Almost again 124 posts Location: Finland
Posted: It seems pretty nice and relaxed. Try to get some footage of you spinning outdoors, there's only so much constructive criticism to be given when you've constrained yourself in that obviously movement-limiting corner of a room. But here's my 2c. To add noticable feeling of variety to your freespinning, try expanding your collection of "safe moves". That is, moves you do while you're thinking what to do next. From this I get the feeling that you're reverting back to your turning weaves and windmills quite often within just 4 minutes. Which are nice, don't get me wrong.. You obviously have many core skills down good. The transitions are smooth, the flow is nice, the planes are relatively clean. It's mostly about the composition and balance of your spinning.
Stnd54SILVER Member newbie 42 posts Location: Manchester/Essen, Germany
Posted: Nice spinning, you remind me a lot of myself, I've been spinning for about the same amount of time and the similarity in style (apart from the wrap combos) is quite freaky lol. I agree with Teamo that outside footage would be abit better, but you seem pretty smooth and confidant. A little more variety would spice things up a little (and I have the same criticism for myself =p), but that comes with time as you learn more stuff and in the meantime you're still interesting to watch so keep up the good work =)
Bam BamYour Average Every Day Sane Psycho 31 posts
Posted: Thanks guys :3 You def have good points about variety and expanding my normal arsenal of moves and I'll keep the whole outside thing in mind for when I make another video.
@Stnd54, that's weird, its the second time I've heard that my style is very similar to someone else small world, huh? (Also love your little avatar pic thingy, Calvin and Hobbes is by far my favorite comic strip ever)
What, me worry?
joffjkDIAMOND Member member 147 posts Location: bangkok,london and somerset, Thailand
Posted: try to think of the camera as an audience it would be nice to have some eye contact and smile once in a while ... keep up the good work
I love thinking in circles
strugzBRONZE Member Carpal \'Tunnel 3,964 posts Location: Southampton - Possibly..., United Kingdom
Posted: Dam Bams - i know its been a while but you dont look half as cute as you used to!
Nice skills dude - take them outside!
"...We don't stop playing because we get old, we get old because we stop playing......."
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