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Mistress Aurora
Mistress Aurora

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Location: Stillwater,OK/Wichita Falls,TX
Member Since: 19th Jan 2003
Total posts: 1032
Posted:She wrote this a few mins ago and sent it to me. I had shown her and my other friend Courtney some of our troupes vids and they thought poi was kewl. I decided to share.I hope yall like it. I did


POI

Watch and get enthralled
Fire oh so bright
Spinning and whirling
Get lost in it.

Lose yourself in
the mystery of the flame
Red and angry
Get lost in it.

Watch as I captivate
your mind with
my quick and graceful movements
Get lost in it.

Don't try to understand
Just be mesmerized
and let go of all your worries
Get lost in it.



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Red_RaveN
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Location: Sala, Slovakia
Member Since: 8th Jun 2003
Total posts: 358
Posted:Hey, cool poem : o ) tell 'er to write more, or maybe to sing a HoP anthem..? would be cool...


Smile.. It confuses people..:)

Wonders never cease as long as you never cease to wonder.

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Astar
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Location: Nova Scotia, Canada.
Member Since: 8th Nov 2002
Total posts: 1591
Posted:It's not very good.

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NickC
Monkey Wrangler
Location: Nova Scotia, Canada
Member Since: 28th Aug 2002
Total posts: 183
Posted:Get lost.


In it.


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DarkFairyQueen
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Location: The Underworld
Member Since: 9th Mar 2002
Total posts: 557
Posted:Put it like a blunt Sir Astar.

Az abouve, So below...

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Mistress Aurora
Mistress Aurora

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Posted:quote:It's not very good Keep in mind she wrote this in the wee hours of the morning and so it is mainly a draft. She does much better poems, but she hasn't really had the time to sit down to make them. This was a spur of the moment thing. When she finds time she is gonna redraft it and add some stuff in it to make it flow alil easier.

I'm glad to hear of yalls oppinions though



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Astar
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Location: Nova Scotia, Canada.
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Posted:I would definatly like to see a revision of it.

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flid
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Location: Warwickshire
Member Since: 27th Aug 2002
Total posts: 3136
Posted:she wrote it on poi eh? I thought we weren't allowed to post reports of drugs incidents anymore?

I mean, you may think that being on poi is ok and you can handle it, but soon you'll be onto more serious three letter words like ghb and pcb.

Play safe kids!


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Mistress Aurora
Mistress Aurora

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Posted:


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