Forums > Videos > Cambridge Community Circus promo vid

Login/Join to Participate

LazyAngel
LazyAngel

Carpal \'Tunnel
Location: Cambridge UK
Member Since: 29th Jul 2004
Total posts: 2895
Posted:Filmed with: DV camera
Multiple subjects
Props: lots
Edited: yes
Fire: no
I want feedback on technicalities of video making

http://video.google.co.uk/videoplay?docid=762306105757356254

just finished editing a promo vid for our local juggling society. Let me know what you think, any comments on editing, angles etc would be appreciated, what worked/didn't work? should there be more text? or more speaking? I want your feedback! smile

[note: it's still processing at the moment, should be properly available very soon]


Because ActiveAngel sounds like a feminine deodorant

Like sex, I'm much more interesting in real life than online.

'Be the change you want to see in the world around you' - Ghandi

Delete Topic

Rellizate
Rellizate

old hand
Location: Cambridge, UK
Member Since: 10th Feb 2007
Total posts: 719
Posted:Cool video! Only problem is the beginning, IMHO it doesn't start as fast as it could making it a less exciting video to start with. Just a thought.

smile


Delete

Durbs
Durbs

Classically British
Location: Epsom, Surrey, England
Member Since: 23rd Sep 2001
Total posts: 5688
Posted:Fun stuff smile
Personally I'd say you could chop up the main guys intro talk and insert it in sperate slots, or just as voice overs so you can get to the "exciting" parts of the video sooner.
Also showing 3 types of gladiators as the first "what we do" might come across a little too competitive smile


Burner of Toast
Spinner of poi
Slacker of enormous magnitude

Delete

LazyAngel
LazyAngel

Carpal \'Tunnel
Location: Cambridge UK
Member Since: 29th Jul 2004
Total posts: 2895
Posted:Thanks for the feedback! Maybe a voiceover with music in the background might have worked? then I could keep the track and footage and not have to fiddle too much with the order of the video..

hmmmm...


Because ActiveAngel sounds like a feminine deodorant

Like sex, I'm much more interesting in real life than online.

'Be the change you want to see in the world around you' - Ghandi

Delete

-sandy-
-sandy-

old hand
Location: Bristol
Member Since: 12th Jul 2004
Total posts: 716
Posted:try putting some of the 'look at what we do' at the beggging as a teaser to get people into the video, there is come cool stuff later on but some people may not persevere that long.

Also.. i agree with durbs, the main guy talking goes on too long, id cut most of what he is saying so it is just an intro to what cambridge circus is, let people who might be turning up find the details out for themselves.

other than that the music fits well and you get a nice vibe from the vid smile


"Don't do it naked!"

Delete

RicheeII
RicheeII

member

Member Since: 1st Nov 2007
Total posts: 37
Posted:All right, the vid goes like:



a) What do you think?

b) Intro

c)exmples

d)outro



I'd like like this:



b) Intro - Shorter, more pointing(straight).

c) Examples - More and without text over(bellow).

a) What do you think? - Nice!

d)outro



whatta place,



:R


BINARY DIVISION

Delete