Chapter 2 (give me yor honest opinion please)

It started with Adam and Chloe at the stables i told you about. They had just come from the hayloft. Chloe was flushed with straw in her hair. It was a beautiful day, the warm sun in azure blue skies, the breeze wafting a jasmine scent across the yard and making hay spiral round in the dizzy gladness of day. They walked to the horses, Chloe often looked back at Adam coyly, with a litlle smirk on her face.

They saddled up Cengie and Inferno and led them away from the stables. As Chloe mounted, her black skirt rode up, flashing her firm, golden tanned thighs. They headed off along the trail path, Inferno braying softly. They rode through wooded copse, sun and shadow playing accross Chloe's face. As they trotted along, Chloe's supple breasts bobbed gently through the material.

As they both entered a clearing, they glanced at each other and began to drive the horses as fast as they could, trying to be the first to reach the stream ahead. The horses were breathing heavily, but were eager to run hard. Both were head to heaad, spurring them on, as they raced, Chloes top and skirt clung to her beautiful body. There was no parting Adam and Chloe as they entered the stream, equal in the race. They dismounted and let the horses quench their thirst as sweat steamed off their sculpted forms. Adam and Chloe rest, laying in each others embrace, sheilding from the sun under a willow tree, as cabbage whites and monarch butterflies basque in the sun and the horses graze and play, rearing and bucking, showing their wilder, playful sides.

They kiss and carres, enjoying the feel of each others bodies, the willow hangs low as if to shield them from their passion being revealed. They undress and lay down in the grass, so cool and refreshing, their entwined bodies are stroked by the breeze like invisible fingers fondling their bodies. They lay for what seems like an eternity just exploring and kissing each other.

Suddenly the willow leaves part as Cengie and Inferno peer through the branches. There is a strong odour, like wet concrete, it riles senses. Adam and Chloe get dressed and leave the shelter of the tree. Thunder peels out, rolling across the sky, like horses in stampeed, hooves striking heavy blows, scaring Inferno, who bolts into the woods.

The young couple mount Cengie and give chase as the sky erupts with rain. Lightening and thunder rage as they rush, headlong, into the trees, ducking and dodging branches, the forest flying by as a blur of green. Inferno just ahead, rain lashing at the pair until their clothes cling tightly to their bodies.

They break from the trees, gaining on Inferno, Cengies torso pulsating and contracting beneath them. Finally they pull along side her. Chloe reaches and grasps Infernos bridal as Adam turns Cengie into her to calm her run. As she calms, Chloe crosses from Adams horse to Inferno. The storm is growing so intense through the trees and the driving rain. They can just make out a rooftop.

They race as fast as they can, darting ever closer to sanctuary. Again they break tree cover, and stare at the miraculous sight before them....................

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