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animatEd
animatEd

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Location: Bristol UK
Member Since: 31st Aug 2004
Total posts: 3540
Posted:OK. A few things. Crit/suggestions wanted.

My Crit:

Waving needs practice. Only been doing it a month or so.
The bridge is a bit sketchy. needs work on the coming down...
5/6 seconds: when I move the ball from one side to the other, not very pretty. too much of a curved line of travel.
The walk isolation = rushed.

And I miss the catch at the end!!

Enjoy: Ed plays with his balls... (no right click needed)


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TinklePants
TinklePants

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Location: Edinburgh burgh burrrrrr
Member Since: 3rd Jul 2005
Total posts: 4217
Posted:ooooh... smooth biggrin

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Durbs
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Location: Epsom, Surrey, England
Member Since: 23rd Sep 2001
Total posts: 5688
Posted:E_war! tongue

Hmmm
You wanted crit....

~ it's too short, and badly lit wink
~ On your waves, try and make the arms/hands start and stop at the same level, i.e. don't drop your arm down after it's waved (unless it's going down for a specific reason)
~ The bridge was oooooooh so close smile Personally I think a heavier ball would also make it look smoother as it would take out all the bouncing around over your fingers
~ You missed the catch at the end wink

I dunno... I've seen you CJ much better than that. Your isolations weren't 100% which I know you can do, it seemed much faster than your normal (natural?) speed, for a video wanting crit - there wasn't much to look at - about 6 moves? One bit of waving... Erm.

Suggestions?
Make a longer video - you won't have to rush moves and can just play as you do normally throwing in the new ideas as and when.

Gosh, this sounds harsh...

Er - I like your hair (?)

wink


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animatEd
animatEd

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Location: Bristol UK
Member Since: 31st Aug 2004
Total posts: 3540
Posted:That's what I wanted!! Sorry there's not much of it, but there's not many clips of me doing contact that I feel comfortable sharing. That was just an 'unannounced' recording, that I thought looked cool.



Tips on the waving are most appreciated. biggrin Thankyou.



OK, heavier ball... I want one, but hard to come across. that was a solid stage ball, and acrylics and clubs don't go so well in my opinion...



The speed, Music affects that. I was more dancing than CJing... (in my head, anyway wink )



as for the bridge... well, it needs practice, but drunken clubbers don't realise that wink



But thanks... Ideas to work with biggrin Keep 'em coming smile


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animatEd
animatEd

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Location: Bristol UK
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Posted:Hmmm... it has come to my attention that some people can't see this clip because of the streaming whatnot. Hmmm... How do I fix this?

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PyroWill
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Location: Staines
Member Since: 4th Aug 2004
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Posted:Only crit i have is dont CJ in piper wink

oh and dont CJ

oh and dont make videos of yourself

and dont suck ass

and dont......just dont
wink only kidding ed, i liked it but would agree with durbs comment that it seems a lot faster than your usual ssyle and as we all know that with extra speed it only encourages screw ups


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Larry
Larry

Electro Ponce!
Location: Hull!
Member Since: 26th Oct 2005
Total posts: 383
Posted:ah, that was a good night!

we'll have to make a more videos, dude!

(now if i only i could do some impressive juggling)


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I assume you're being rhetorical?
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_Aime_
_Aime_

Carpal \'Tunnel
Location: Hastings
Member Since: 2nd Jan 2004
Total posts: 4172
Posted:Definatly rushed to what I'm used to seeing you do..
And that club looks like a pub - LCM is where you need to be wink


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PyroWill
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Location: Staines
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Posted:Hey larry crazy larry!!! you coming to the meet in pearson park on sunday 6th?

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Cantus
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Posted:You look like a big blue Q with a question mark across you. Or did i miss something?

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