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spacedementia


spacedementia

newbie
Location: Missouri

Total posts: 16
Posted:I might be insane
but I thought I would start this
a thread of haiku


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Kelhoon
GOLD Member since Jul 2004

Member
Location: Christchurch, NZ

Total posts: 6
Posted:Balls, clubs, rings. Throw, catch:
Meditation, rythym, flow.
Orbit eternal.


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bing!
BRONZE Member since Jan 2005

bing!

i beat my inner child
Location: manchester UK

Total posts: 184
Posted:i have just learned what,
haiku is all about so,
this is my first go!


--the spark what lit the flame which started the fire that burned forever--

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Shu
BRONZE Member since Mar 2017

Shu

Retro Fyre Wizzard
Location: Pietermaritzburg (KZN)

Total posts: 538
Posted:fire poi in my hand
living entrancing energy
fluid body dance


Regards hug

Shu
(Ice-E FyreStorm - Group Manager & Performer)

You know those people your parentals warned you about?... I'M ONE OF THEM! ubbloco
Yes, i do bite!!

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bluecat


bluecat

geek, level 1
Location: everywhere

Total posts: 5300
Posted:bored at work I seem to spend
too much time on Home of poi
exchanging old threads for new


Holistic Spinner (I hope)

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_Clare_
BRONZE Member since Oct 2002

_Clare_

Still wiggling
Location: Belfast

Total posts: 5967
Posted:Corrected to avoid

Random lines and apparent stupidity

Oops. Got it wrong again



rolleyes



shrug

EDITED_BY: Firepoise (1116586446)


Getting to the other side smile

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spritie
SILVER Member since Sep 2001

spritie

Pooh-Bah
Location: Galveston, TX

Total posts: 2014
Posted:don't people know that

five seven five haiku is

and not random lines

biggrin


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DoktorSkell
SILVER Member since Jan 2005

DoktorSkell

addict
Location: Van Diemans Land

Total posts: 475
Posted:i wrote a haiku
its not as good as yours is
so i wont tell you


Fair luna bright, fair luna moon
it shines at night but fades too soon
fair luna moon, fair luna bright
forever we dance
we dance under starlight

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firebyrd
SILVER Member since May 2005

member
Location: belfast

Total posts: 154
Posted:concentric circles
flames painting rhythmic patterns
expression of my soul

biggrin (i'm quite proud of that....)

spacedementia - nice idea, we could write a spinning renga, if all the haiku are on topic say poi or staff creating a list of related haiku could form a really nice renga.. what d'ya think?


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PyroWill
GOLD Member since Aug 2004

PyroWill

HoP's Barman. Trapped aged 6 months
Location: Staines

Total posts: 4437
Posted:i.....
am.....
confused....

what a bad one, someone dare to quote what a haiku is?

please biggrin


An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind

Give a man a fish and he'll eat 4 a day hit a man with a brick and you can have all his fish and his wife

"Will's to pretty for prison" - Simian

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Shu
BRONZE Member since Mar 2017

Shu

Retro Fyre Wizzard
Location: Pietermaritzburg (KZN)

Total posts: 538
Posted:For PyroWill
Written by: spritie

don't people know that
five seven five haiku is
and not random lines
biggrin



Regards hug

Shu
(Ice-E FyreStorm - Group Manager & Performer)

You know those people your parentals warned you about?... I'M ONE OF THEM! ubbloco
Yes, i do bite!!

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PyroWill
GOLD Member since Aug 2004

PyroWill

HoP's Barman. Trapped aged 6 months
Location: Staines

Total posts: 4437
Posted:still dont understand

An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind

Give a man a fish and he'll eat 4 a day hit a man with a brick and you can have all his fish and his wife

"Will's to pretty for prison" - Simian

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Fine_Rabid_Dog


Internet Hate Machine
Location: They seek him here, they seek ...

Total posts: 10530
Posted:a haiku is a japenese poem type jobby that is arranged like this

Five syllables
seven syllables
five syllables

Tho i may be wrong... feel free to correct me if i am


The existance of flamethrowers says that someone, somewhere, at sometime said "I need to set that thing on fire, but it's too far away."

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Gandy
BRONZE Member since Feb 2005

Gandy

member
Location: London

Total posts: 34
Posted:no you are not wrong

in fact you are quite correct

with your counting lines





though i thought they were supposed to be about capturing your surroundings (now I could be very wrong with that bit)



coul not resist adding this:



flowers, weaves and loops

blazing trails through velvet black

soothing balm of light

EDITED_BY: Gandy (1116591274)


*are those my feet?!*

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nome
SILVER Member since Apr 2005

nome

Member
Location: Edinburgh

Total posts: 35
Posted:It often includes
Some images of seasons
And some kind of twist


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Fire_Moose
SILVER Member since May 2007

Fire_Moose

Elusive and Bearded
Location: Scottsdale, AZ

Total posts: 3597
Posted:I can't beleive this
Only fifteen posts on here?
This is madness, Post.


O.B.E.S.E.

Owned by Mynci!

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jarle
GOLD Member since Mar 2007

jarle

Lv15 Ranger
Location: Melbourne, Australia

Total posts: 1489
Posted:Isn't this on KoL?
Or mayhaps I am crazy,
I hope the former.


Kupo!

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pineapple pete
SILVER Member since Sep 2004

pineapple pete

water based
Location: melbourne

Total posts: 5125
Posted:haikus are easy
but sometimes they dont make sence
refridgerator

hug


"you know there are no trophys for doing silly things in real life yeah pete?" said ant "you wont get a 'listened to ride of the valkyries all the way to vietnam' trophy"

*proud owner of the very cute fire_spinning_angel, birgit and neon shaolin*

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Brenn
PLATINUM Member since Jun 2004

Brenn

Will carpal your tunnel in a minute.
Location: Melbourne, Australia

Total posts: 3286
Posted:I just want to say,
Something completely silly,
I'm covered in bees


ॐ

Owner of burningoftheclavey smile
Owned by Lost83spy

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jarle
GOLD Member since Mar 2007

jarle

Lv15 Ranger
Location: Melbourne, Australia

Total posts: 1489
Posted:Something that bugs me,
People talking in lectures.
JUST SHUT THE HELL UP!


Kupo!

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Sambo_Flux
GOLD Member since Jun 2006

Sambo_Flux

Introverted
Location: Norf London

Total posts: 833
Posted:Already have one

Find it in my signature

This one is pointless


My Mind is a Ship
Emotions become the Waves
Soul is the Ocean

If a quizz is quizzical, what is a test?

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jarle
GOLD Member since Mar 2007

jarle

Lv15 Ranger
Location: Melbourne, Australia

Total posts: 1489
Posted:Yay for signatures!
Mine's from Final Fantasy,
Stolen like a kiss.


Kupo!

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Deamon_Llama
BRONZE Member since Mar 2017

Deamon_Llama

member
Location: Melbourne

Total posts: 78
Posted:perhaps a purpose
is not needed in poem
but just some beauty?


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No statements are true unless they can be proven scientifically.
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UnclassifiedLeggyGirl
BRONZE Member since Aug 2006

UnclassifiedLeggyGirl

One day penguins will take over the world
Location: Derby

Total posts: 916
Posted:beauty is needed
for any poem to work
except for this one...


ummmm...........anybody have any suggestions as to what i can put here?!

mjk is monitoring your interwebs!

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Deamon_Llama
BRONZE Member since Mar 2017

Deamon_Llama

member
Location: Melbourne

Total posts: 78
Posted:Poetry; beauty
A correlation unmatched
Words in their right form


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No statements are true unless they can be proven scientifically.
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MagsKat
BRONZE Member since Mar 2017

MagsKat

Don't feed her cookies
Location: Surrey side

Total posts: 113
Posted:twisting and turning,
energy is flowing free
Spin poi with me please


Formally known as kat224

We are not friends.. we never were.. but if i was part of your life then i thank you

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Fire_Moose
SILVER Member since May 2007

Fire_Moose

Elusive and Bearded
Location: Scottsdale, AZ

Total posts: 3597
Posted:This was inspired
By the great game, K-O-L
I think it's genius


O.B.E.S.E.

Owned by Mynci!

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MagsKat
BRONZE Member since Mar 2017

MagsKat

Don't feed her cookies
Location: Surrey side

Total posts: 113
Posted:burning comets
trail blazing bursts of light
keep the fire alight


Formally known as kat224

We are not friends.. we never were.. but if i was part of your life then i thank you

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BurdaA
SILVER Member since Jul 2007

BurdaA

Sacrebleu
Location: At the quiet limit

Total posts: 377
Posted:I, desire within,
spin my quiet web between
your heart and others


Poi(poi~y) n. : A Hawaiian food made from the tuber of the taro that is cooked, pounded to a paste, and fermented.
- part owner of Wooktastic

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JauntyJames
SILVER Member since Dec 2004

JauntyJames

Carpal \'Tunnel
Location: Hampshire College, MA, USA

Total posts: 3533
Posted: Written by: pineapple pete


haikus are easy
but sometimes they dont make sence
refridgerator

hug



That's on my shirt right now.


-James

"How do you know if you're happy or sad without a mask? Or angry? Or ready for dessert?"

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Invader Xan
SILVER Member since May 2005

Invader Xan

Your friendly neighbourhood mad scientist
Location: Over the hills and far away

Total posts: 479
Posted:Round and round they go
Until strings catch upon strings
Ouch! No! Not again...


"Love the art in yourself and not yourself in the art."
--Konstantin Stanislavisky

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