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Location: Missouri
I might be insane
but I thought I would start this
a thread of haiku
Member
6 posts
Location: Christchurch, NZ, New Zealand
Balls, clubs, rings. Throw, catch:
Meditation, rythym, flow.
Orbit eternal.
i beat my inner child
184 posts
Location: manchester UK
i have just learned what,
haiku is all about so,
this is my first go!
--the spark what lit the flame which started the fire that burned forever--
Retro Fyre Wizzard
538 posts
Location: Pietermaritzburg (KZN), South Africa
fire poi in my hand
living entrancing energy
fluid body dance
Regards 
Shu
(Ice-E FyreStorm - Group Manager & Performer)
You know those people your parentals warned you about?... I'M ONE OF THEM! 
Yes, i do bite!!
5,300 posts
Location: everywhere
bored at work I seem to spend
too much time on Home of poi
exchanging old threads for new
Holistic Spinner (I hope)
Still wiggling
5,967 posts
Location: Belfast, Northern Ireland (UK)
Corrected to avoid
Random lines and apparent stupidity
Oops. Got it wrong again
EDITED_BY: Firepoise (1116586446)
Getting to the other side 
Pooh-Bah
2,014 posts
Location: Galveston, TX, USA
don't people know that
five seven five haiku is
and not random lines
addict
475 posts
Location: Van Diemans Land, Australia
i wrote a haiku
its not as good as yours is
so i wont tell you
Fair luna bright, fair luna moon
it shines at night but fades too soon
fair luna moon, fair luna bright
forever we dance
we dance under starlight
member
154 posts
Location: belfast, United Kingdom
concentric circles
flames painting rhythmic patterns
expression of my soul
(i'm quite proud of that....)spacedementia - nice idea, we could write a spinning renga, if all the haiku are on topic say poi or staff creating a list of related haiku could form a really nice renga.. what d'ya think?
HoP's Barman. Trapped aged 6 months
4,437 posts
Location: Staines, United Kingdom
i.....
am.....
confused....
what a bad one, someone dare to quote what a haiku is?
please
An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind
Give a man a fish and he'll eat 4 a day hit a man with a brick and you can have all his fish and his wife
"Will's to pretty for prison" - Simian
Retro Fyre Wizzard
538 posts
Location: Pietermaritzburg (KZN), South Africa
For PyroWill
Written by: spritie
don't people know that
five seven five haiku is
and not random lines
Regards
Shu
(Ice-E FyreStorm - Group Manager & Performer)
You know those people your parentals warned you about?... I'M ONE OF THEM!
Yes, i do bite!!
HoP's Barman. Trapped aged 6 months
4,437 posts
Location: Staines, United Kingdom
still dont understand
An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind
Give a man a fish and he'll eat 4 a day hit a man with a brick and you can have all his fish and his wife
"Will's to pretty for prison" - Simian
10,530 posts
Location: They seek him here, they seek him there...
a haiku is a japenese poem type jobby that is arranged like this
Five syllables
seven syllables
five syllables
Tho i may be wrong... feel free to correct me if i am
The existance of flamethrowers says that someone, somewhere, at sometime said "I need to set that thing on fire, but it's too far away."
member
34 posts
Location: London, United Kingdom
no you are not wrong
in fact you are quite correct
with your counting lines
though i thought they were supposed to be about capturing your surroundings (now I could be very wrong with that bit)
coul not resist adding this:
flowers, weaves and loops
blazing trails through velvet black
soothing balm of light
EDITED_BY: Gandy (1116591274)
*are those my feet?!*
Member
35 posts
Location: Edinburgh, United Kingdom
It often includes
Some images of seasons
And some kind of twist
Elusive and Bearded
3,597 posts
Location: Scottsdale, AZ, USA
I can't beleive this
Only fifteen posts on here?
This is madness, Post.
O.B.E.S.E.
Owned by Mynci!
Lv15 Ranger
1,489 posts
Location: Melbourne, Australia
water based
5,125 posts
Location: melbourne, Australia
haikus are easy
but sometimes they dont make sence
refridgerator
"you know there are no trophys for doing silly things in real life yeah pete?" said ant "you wont get a 'listened to ride of the valkyries all the way to vietnam' trophy"
*proud owner of the very cute fire_spinning_angel, birgit and neon shaolin*
Will carpal your tunnel in a minute.
3,286 posts
Location: Melbourne, Australia
I just want to say,
Something completely silly,
I'm covered in bees
ॐ
Owner of burningoftheclavey
Owned by Lost83spy
Lv15 Ranger
1,489 posts
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Something that bugs me,
People talking in lectures.
JUST SHUT THE HELL UP!
Kupo!
Introverted
833 posts
Location: Norf London, United Kingdom
Already have one
Find it in my signature
This one is pointless
My Mind is a Ship
Emotions become the Waves
Soul is the Ocean
If a quizz is quizzical, what is a test?
Lv15 Ranger
1,489 posts
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Yay for signatures!
Mine's from Final Fantasy,
Stolen like a kiss.
Kupo!
member
78 posts
Location: Melbourne, Australia
perhaps a purpose
is not needed in poem
but just some beauty?
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No statements are true unless they can be proven scientifically.
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One day penguins will take over the world
916 posts
Location: Derby, United Kingdom
beauty is needed
for any poem to work
except for this one...
ummmm...........anybody have any suggestions as to what i can put here?!
mjk is monitoring your interwebs!
member
78 posts
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Poetry; beauty
A correlation unmatched
Words in their right form
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No statements are true unless they can be proven scientifically.
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Don't feed her cookies
113 posts
Location: Surrey side, United Kingdom
twisting and turning,
energy is flowing free
Spin poi with me please
Formally known as kat224
We are not friends.. we never were.. but if i was part of your life then i thank you
Elusive and Bearded
3,597 posts
Location: Scottsdale, AZ, USA
This was inspired
By the great game, K-O-L
I think it's genius
O.B.E.S.E.
Owned by Mynci!
Don't feed her cookies
113 posts
Location: Surrey side, United Kingdom
burning comets
trail blazing bursts of light
keep the fire alight
Formally known as kat224
We are not friends.. we never were.. but if i was part of your life then i thank you
Sacrebleu
377 posts
Location: At the quiet limit, United Kingdom
I, desire within,
spin my quiet web between
your heart and others
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Carpal \'Tunnel
3,533 posts
Location: Hampshire College, MA, USA
Written by: pineapple pete
haikus are easy
but sometimes they dont make sence
refridgerator
That's on my shirt right now.
-James
"How do you know if you're happy or sad without a mask? Or angry? Or ready for dessert?"
Your friendly neighbourhood mad scientist
479 posts
Location: Over the hills and far away, United Kingdom
Round and round they go
Until strings catch upon strings
Ouch! No! Not again...
"Love the art in yourself and not yourself in the art."
--Konstantin Stanislavisky
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