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{anthrax}
{anthrax}

Look I've changed my title!
Location: England
Member Since: 10th Aug 2004
Total posts: 209
Posted:Hi there peeps.

If anyone has any poetry they would like me to write for them, then just ask. I will do any kind of request, so feel free to post what you desire.

An Example:

I lie here now,
Hopefully not eternally,
My tears staining the floor into deeper shades,

I have lost it,
Lost her,
Where has my love gone to?

The pain of broken hearts,
Ripping me inside,
Like a knife to flesh.

Torn apart from reality,
My mind wanders into misery,
Clothes now stained crimson.


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Posted:How about an Ode to Carrots? tongue

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{anthrax}
{anthrax}

Look I've changed my title!
Location: England
Member Since: 10th Aug 2004
Total posts: 209
Posted:*ahem* an ode to carrots:



Life.

Short, but life non the less.



I was conceived in the ground,

My mothers womb being the purest of all,

Who is more perfect for the job than nature?



Then human obsession came,

Ripped me from the ground,

Disturbing my mothers fragile surface.



Instantly life departed me,

Nothing remains of me now,

Consumed by pure hate.

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Posted:Impressive, but can you now do it from the Rabbit's perspective?

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{anthrax}
{anthrax}

Look I've changed my title!
Location: England
Member Since: 10th Aug 2004
Total posts: 209
Posted:lol ok your pushing it but here goes.

Mmm Carrots:

I used to think I had it all,
A nice home,
An extensive family,
Hordes of minions under my control.

But something never seemed quite right,
I didn't feel complete,
Almost as though there was a hunger I couldn't satisfy,
And then it came to me.

The holy grail,
My new best friend,
My drug,
My curse.

The great object of my desires,
The carrot,
Its sweet flesh peirced by my lust for more,
Each one I ate consumed me further.

The obsession ruled me,
It had to stop,
Tomorrow I keep telling myself,
Tomorrow is when I'll give it up.


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nearly_all_gone

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Location: Southampton
Member Since: 3rd Aug 2004
Total posts: 1626
Posted:Never has a more humbling ode to the desperateness of carrot dependency been... typed. God bless us, everyone. wink biggrin

What a wonderful miracle if only we could look through each other's eyes for an instant.
Thoreau

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{anthrax}
{anthrax}

Look I've changed my title!
Location: England
Member Since: 10th Aug 2004
Total posts: 209
Posted:haha, yes i think Patrick the shaved badgers obsession is rather quite.... disturbing for lack of a better word ubblol

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Posted:Still a little troubled at the idea of a guy writing poetry for me though! Flattering maybe, but still a little weird! tongue

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{anthrax}
{anthrax}

Look I've changed my title!
Location: England
Member Since: 10th Aug 2004
Total posts: 209
Posted:lol, I said i would do any request, no mater how... different. If carrots float yer boat then so be it, enjoy. tongue

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Posted:ubblol ubblol ubblol

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