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a poem written online

The_Pirate_Dyke_BoyHOP Lord of the Pirate Admiralty
1,079 posts
Location: Canterbury, UK

Posted: 21st Oct 2003
right, im gonna write tis poem online, dunno why, but im gonna make it up in the "write message" box, here goes:

for so long now
i have been free
i have forgotten you
you have left my life
and now
once again
you bring it all crashing down

You killed me
not the other way around
i suffered for so long
for a blind person
who only saw the grass
on the other side of the bridge

So why now come back
like a curse
once a blessing
now and forever my torment
just f*ck off
these wounds will not be reopened
for one like you
whore

D.B.
X x X x X

Ship off the starboard! sound general quarters! noise and light discipline! man the cannons! GET ME THE RUM!

Master of the Free Hug Program

DentrassiGOLD Member
ZORT!
3,045 posts
Location: Brisbane, Australia

Posted: 21st Oct 2003
i think you need a hug.....

"Here kitty kitty...." - Schroedinger.

Rouge DragonBRONZE Member
Insert Champagne Here
13,215 posts
Location: without class distinction, Australia

Posted: 21st Oct 2003
i agree!

i would have changed ***** to phallus, and claire to petey Petey

Rougie: but that's what I'm doing here
Arnwyn: what letting me adjust myself in your room?..don't you dare quote that on HoP...

colemanSILVER Member
big and good and broken
7,330 posts
Location: lunn dunn, yoo kay, United Kingdom

Posted: 21st Oct 2003
ouch.

"i see you at 'dis cafe.
i come to 'dis cafe quite a lot myself.
they do porridge."
- tim westwood

UCOFSILVER Member
15,417 posts
Location: South Wales

Posted: 21st Oct 2003
erm...

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!

yes..i completly agree..

-the lightbulb

funkymonkymember
192 posts
Location: oxford

Posted: 21st Oct 2003
gee... i wonder what he was thinking about when he wrote it......

where i laid my head, in the sun you created for me, i see the sides of the story you never told. you came to try and take them away, so i'd trust in you my peace someday. to your breast you'd hold me warm, so close you didn't see my smile, the one i saved from you so many times, and give to the one i hold here now.

man... i love writting stuff. not very good mind, but like it all the same

The_Pirate_Dyke_BoyHOP Lord of the Pirate Admiralty
1,079 posts
Location: Canterbury, UK

Posted: 22nd Oct 2003
thanks for the hugs guys, much appreciated, THANK YOU

and heres a hug for the funkymonkey, that was brilliant, never let anyone tell you you cant write, not even your schizophrenic other half!

i used to say that, but now peeps wanna publish my shiznit!

yay me!

oh... and thanks of the bulb jon-san, most useful...

D.B.
X x X x X

Ship off the starboard! sound general quarters! noise and light discipline! man the cannons! GET ME THE RUM!

Master of the Free Hug Program

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