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Carpal \'Tunnel
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Location: Cambridge UK
Posted:
Filmed with: DV camera
Multiple subjects
Props: lots
Edited: yes
Fire: no
I want feedback on technicalities of video making
https://video.google.co.uk/videoplay?docid=762306105757356254
just finished editing a promo vid for our local juggling society. Let me know what you think, any comments on editing, angles etc would be appreciated, what worked/didn't work? should there be more text? or more speaking? I want your feedback!
[note: it's still processing at the moment, should be properly available very soon]
Filmed with: DV camera
Multiple subjects
Props: lots
Edited: yes
Fire: no
I want feedback on technicalities of video making
https://video.google.co.uk/videoplay?docid=762306105757356254
just finished editing a promo vid for our local juggling society. Let me know what you think, any comments on editing, angles etc would be appreciated, what worked/didn't work? should there be more text? or more speaking? I want your feedback!
[note: it's still processing at the moment, should be properly available very soon]
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Location: Epsom, Surrey, England
Posted:
Fun stuff
Personally I'd say you could chop up the main guys intro talk and insert it in sperate slots, or just as voice overs so you can get to the "exciting" parts of the video sooner.
Also showing 3 types of gladiators as the first "what we do" might come across a little too competitive
Fun stuff
Personally I'd say you could chop up the main guys intro talk and insert it in sperate slots, or just as voice overs so you can get to the "exciting" parts of the video sooner.
Also showing 3 types of gladiators as the first "what we do" might come across a little too competitive
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Carpal \'Tunnel
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Location: Cambridge UK
Carpal \'Tunnel
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Location: Cambridge UK
Posted:
Thanks for the feedback! Maybe a voiceover with music in the background might have worked? then I could keep the track and footage and not have to fiddle too much with the order of the video..
hmmmm...
Thanks for the feedback! Maybe a voiceover with music in the background might have worked? then I could keep the track and footage and not have to fiddle too much with the order of the video..
hmmmm...
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Location: Bristol, United Kingdom
Posted:
try putting some of the 'look at what we do' at the beggging as a teaser to get people into the video, there is come cool stuff later on but some people may not persevere that long.
Also.. i agree with durbs, the main guy talking goes on too long, id cut most of what he is saying so it is just an intro to what cambridge circus is, let people who might be turning up find the details out for themselves.
other than that the music fits well and you get a nice vibe from the vid
try putting some of the 'look at what we do' at the beggging as a teaser to get people into the video, there is come cool stuff later on but some people may not persevere that long.
Also.. i agree with durbs, the main guy talking goes on too long, id cut most of what he is saying so it is just an intro to what cambridge circus is, let people who might be turning up find the details out for themselves.
other than that the music fits well and you get a nice vibe from the vid
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Posted:
All right, the vid goes like:
a) What do you think?
b) Intro
c)exmples
d)outro
I'd like like this:
b) Intro - Shorter, more pointing(straight).
c) Examples - More and without text over(bellow).
a) What do you think? - Nice!
d)outro
whatta place,
:R
All right, the vid goes like:
a) What do you think?
b) Intro
c)exmples
d)outro
I'd like like this:
b) Intro - Shorter, more pointing(straight).
c) Examples - More and without text over(bellow).
a) What do you think? - Nice!
d)outro
whatta place,
:R
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