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#399835 - 23/09/04 10:45 AM Could anyone give their opinion?
Face_NL Offline
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Registered: 07/09/02
Loc: Netherlands - Breda
Hey everyone,

I designed a few businesscards, and 1 of them will be printed lots of times (at least 250 ), but I can't choose between the designs... So if you could go to
Telpeva's Gallery
and tell me which design you like most, and what should be changed about it (text color, font, other colors, placing of stuff...)

Bij voorbaat dank -> Thnx!
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#399836 - 23/09/04 10:50 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
UnscrupulousChavOffersFoot Offline
Silly Chavs

Registered: 17/04/02
Loc: Possibly Romania
Well..

If this isnt a blantant attempt to get everyone to look at your gallery, I dont know what is.
When your pictures are popular, they are displayed at eh top of the screen, thus giving your free advertising!



and you might want to change the phone numbers to real ones as I very much doubt that people could get hold of you on 06-12345678

Unless that is your actuall number?

In which case you are very very lucky....

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#399837 - 23/09/04 11:30 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: UnscrupulousChavOffersFoot]
Lillie Frog Offline
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Registered: 31/05/04
Loc: wales
I like number 4
I like the colour in the center section, that bluey purpley colour.
It's nice.
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#399838 - 23/09/04 11:51 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Lillie Frog]
Face_NL Offline
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Registered: 07/09/02
Loc: Netherlands - Breda
hehe, I haven't thought about the free advertising part , really, but I don't really think that anyone on HoP is interested in that...

And the phone-numbers are ofcourse not right, but I was to lazy to search them up .... Anyhow, it was ment to be purely about the design (and not the correctness of the text <warriorsoflight.tk is not ours for example, that will be changed as well>...)
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#399839 - 23/09/04 12:19 PM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
Medusa Offline
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Registered: 25/11/03
Loc: 8 days at Cloudbreak, 6 in Per...
I like design 1 and 4....I am indecisive about which one is the better of the two.

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#399840 - 23/09/04 12:22 PM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Medusa]
orkoss Offline
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Registered: 22/09/04
Loc: veracruz, mexico
i think the number 2 is just perfect

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#399841 - 23/09/04 01:10 PM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
Kombi guy Administrator Offline
HOP OM

Registered: 21/11/03
Loc: HOP Central, New Zealand
Well done very nice cards
I actually like #3 I like the simplicity of just the black with the fire, very funky.

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#399842 - 23/09/04 01:13 PM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: orkoss]
Face_NL Offline
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Registered: 07/09/02
Loc: Netherlands - Breda
Again design number 4? That's weird, I didn't expect that, It was one of the lesser in my opinion (the blue/purple was just an experiment)... And number 1 is in my opinion one of the best...
till so far -> inconclusive ...

thnx for the reactions, keep m going
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#399843 - 23/09/04 05:08 PM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
Psycho_lemming Offline
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Registered: 16/07/04
Loc: Scotland
Mmmm.... i like 3 best
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#399844 - 23/09/04 10:54 PM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Old-User--6076]
vanize Offline
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Registered: 21/08/01
Loc: Austin, Texas
#4 is my fav.

urm... you having them professionally printed, or doing them yourself? if it isn't proffesional, then you might think about using a lot less black, as large areas of black ink tend to rub off in people wallets and make them uptight (speaking from experience)
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#399845 - 23/09/04 11:04 PM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: vanize]
ado-p Offline
Pirate Ninja

Registered: 13/05/04
Loc: Galway/Ireland
I think you should group your teams skills together collectivley rather than seperate them per person.....

as in

Warriors of light
Poi/Staff/Dance/Fireeating etc.

Contact:
Dave John Tom
122237 23556 23435

Agree with Vanice about the black also, looks great with fire but unless you printing high quality glossys the you might have a problem....
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#399846 - 23/09/04 11:19 PM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: ado-p]
Fine_Rabid_Dog Offline
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Registered: 26/05/04
Loc: They seek him here, they seek ...
4 looks purty. mes like it!
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#399847 - 24/09/04 12:02 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Fine_Rabid_Dog]
Face_NL Offline
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Registered: 07/09/02
Loc: Netherlands - Breda
more 4...hmmmz... so 3 and 4 favorites till so far...

They will be printed professionally, the quality is very nice, very good, and it isn't expensive at all, so that's a nice combination right !?!?! I've got full-color cards of them, only more or less entirely blue, and that doesn't give off, so I have confident in their black as well

Hmmmz, that is interesting; putting the skills together, I think I will do that!
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#399848 - 24/09/04 12:05 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
rarr Offline
rrragghh!

Registered: 13/07/04
Loc: Manchester, UK
Businesscard design 2!

just my 2p worth

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#399849 - 24/09/04 12:19 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
Fuero Offline
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Registered: 31/08/04
Loc: Netherlands
If you want a nice deep black you should put 40% cyan through it.
Take it from a designer.
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#399850 - 24/09/04 12:21 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
Face_NL Offline
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Registered: 07/09/02
Loc: Netherlands - Breda
Hmmmz, Foxy liked 4 and 3 as well, 3 most... What is nice about 4 that 3 lacks? if it is the color I might combine them by taking 3 and put the bluelike layer on top of the sparkling picture...
<I think I will make slight adjustments to three/four this night, I will put the result online ofcourse>
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#399851 - 24/09/04 12:23 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
Face_NL Offline
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Registered: 07/09/02
Loc: Netherlands - Breda
Heya Designer, you can give me details/tips/explanation tonight

ps the choice is a probably choice...
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#399852 - 24/09/04 01:14 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Face_NL]
Sunrise Offline
Ivetka

Registered: 24/05/03
number 3....berendooooooooooo definetly...


so so talented guy!!!


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#399853 - 24/09/04 01:16 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Sunrise]
Sunrise Offline
Ivetka

Registered: 24/05/03
yes and tomorrow at 10 am...
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#399854 - 24/09/04 02:45 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Sunrise]
Tao Star Offline
Pooh-Bah

Registered: 30/05/03
Loc: Bristol
1 or 2, but probably 2.

very professional looking, but interesting. i love the picture.
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#399855 - 24/09/04 02:54 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Tao Star]
The Real Fryed Fish Offline
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Registered: 02/06/04
Loc: state of confusion
i liked 3 or 4 the best, would not change a thing on either of them if you use it
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#399856 - 24/09/04 03:10 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: The Real Fryed Fish]
nearly_all_gone Offline
Pooh-Bah

Registered: 03/08/04
Loc: Southampton
I'd say 2 was my favourite... like the style of it. Different ones could have different pics..?
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#399857 - 24/09/04 07:37 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: nearly_all_gone]
rbmnyc Offline
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Registered: 10/07/03
Loc: Brooklyn, NY
#3

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#399858 - 24/09/04 07:57 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: rbmnyc]
Trillian Offline
Llamas are larger than frogs.

Registered: 28/02/04
Loc: Cincinnati, Ohio
I like #3 the most, too.
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#399859 - 24/09/04 08:10 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Trillian]
NOn Offline
activist for HoPper liberation.

Registered: 23/06/04
Loc: ffidrac
I really like the two images on either side of #4 and they way they blend in to the background, so am not too keen on the bluey bit meself... i think it would look nice just back with those two images sort of glowing out, very striking... I like #3 too but i think you could space out the two fella on the top right hand corner a bit more so you can see them both. They're all very nice though
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#399860 - 24/09/04 11:47 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: NOn]
Dom Administrator Offline
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Registered: 19/12/01
Loc: Bristol, UK
I don't like balck backgrounds, but if you insist on using it then realy check a proof before doing the print run to make sure the text is actually readable.

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#399861 - 27/09/04 10:22 AM Re: Could anyone give their opinion? [Re: Dom]
Face_NL Offline
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Registered: 07/09/02
Loc: Netherlands - Breda
Hey everyone,

I counted the votes :-), and the winner was number 3, followed by one vote btw by number two and number four btw...
I sat today with my two group mates and agreed to make it number three, and when I showed them small differences, they liked a version with lines on it, so the result will be online in half an hour or so...

Btw, I changed the text so the arts are general, not specified per person, and I spaced out the two people, thnx for the advice!
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